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beforeiwake
2001-12-18 at 4:20 p.m.


if i die...

Content: There's a good mixture of poetry, introspection, and day to day stuff here. I like how there's variety. Sometimes he tends to go off on tangents, but on the whole it's good writing. I enjoy it quite a lot, not any improvement needed on grammar or anything. Good job! 28/30

Layout: Ok, the main image is great and so are the small ones on the right but...the words following the cursor can be annoying. It becomes distracting when I'm trying to read. But the colors are great together. I like the quote at the top of the main image. Not much more to say other than the words following the cursor can be very distracting. 22/25

Updates: There are some pretty big gaps and multiple entries. I wish he were a bit more consistent. 8/10

Navigation: Fairly easy, except I wish everything were in one place instead of on the right and the bottom. 8/10

Errors: None that I was aware of 5/5

Contact: e-mail, guestbook, notes 3/5

Bonus: e-mail, notes, guestbook, profile, rings, links 6/15

Total: 80/100

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