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universalmind
04.09.04 at 8:51 p.m.


[ Tap Water Builds Character ]:
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Content: (30/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Wow. I feel, enlightened or inspired or something. I'm glad to hear you're a writer, because if you weren't one, I'd have to suggest it to you. You are an excellent writer. I didn't read too much of your fiction that was mixed in, but for the most part, the entries were amazing. I loved this one, because it inspired me at my own sport. I just want to congradulate you at writing. There is really no suggestion or praise I could give you that I'm sure you haven't already heard. I enjoy the fact that you tell stories as you tell about your day. That is nice because it ties your life together from the present and past, and that is what the journalling idea is all about. (Did you like my nice use of a noun as a verb there?)

Design: (26/30)
It's a really neat idea. I don't think it's quite conceptualized the way I would like it, but I love the oxygen tank and mask at the bottom of each entry. The picture itself seems streched vertically, and I don't look at it much because of that. But the rest of the design fits really well and works throughout the entry. This is a nice design.

Update: (6/10)
Not too often, but when you write, it's lots and it's great.

Navigation: (5/5)
Very nice.

Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.

Contact: (3/5)
Brain Fuck.

Bonus: (10/15)
Infomation, Other Blogs.

Total: (85/100)

Further Comments:
Did you mean it to be spelt "Infomation?"; Happy 19th Birthday.

Favorite Quote:
"And then it occurs to me again: we’re all here at this university, and all we’re doing is struggling towards a profession."

Reviewed by: Valerie
song of the review: superman's dead -- our lady peace

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