(allicanbe)
Content: (19/30)
Started here and ended here (meaning I Read your entire site). Your site is more like 75% lyrics, 15% drama and 10% daily activites. This is such a bad balance, I didn't even read half of the entries because they were only lyrics. I just...sigh. you make everything seem so unbelievably dramatic. It is not that hard to lose weight, especially if it's food weight (like fast food weight). And this sentence: "running around my basement during commercials of the swan, the amazing rae, survivor, the oc, shit like that and doing like jumping jacks, sit ups, and other junk while the show is on" drove me crazy. If you want to lose weight, turn the tv off entirely. It is just tv, and I'm sure you'll live. You have fallen prey to the projection of what is great because you watch too much tv about people who look "fabulous." They don't, it's called editting. Your entries are so varied in how rational you seem (for example, sometimes you're like "I miss my mom because she's in the hospital" then in the next entry you're cussing her out because you're so mad. You just...let your emotions run your actions. I couldn't stand it. Your entries need to be balanced more to provide an enjoyable read to a stranger, especially a reviewing one.
Design: (23/30)
Your design is...meh. It doesn't fit you at all, I don't think. First, it's drugs, not all of the other things you seem to have more problems with. It's too dark for your entries, and while it's a nice enough idea for a design, the colors don't even all match. It's just like a conglomeration that I can't see as being a good opener for your site. It makes you seem more depressed than you actually are (contrary to what your entries might allude to, you're not that depressed) and...dunno, just gives off vibes I wouldn't want people to have as a first impression from.
Update: (6/10)
About every 3-4 days. Not bad I guess...
Navigation: (5/5)
Easy enough.
Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.
Contact: (2/5)
Notes & Email.
Bonus: (12/15)
51 things, Lots of annoying lyrics, a Survey, Stats.
Total: (72/100)
Further Comments:
Nothing more.
Favorite Quote:
Never found one I liked.
Reviewed by: Valerie