(angeleyescia)
Content: (25/30)
First, I'm glad you live in Ireland, because if you were drinking that much at your age in the USA, I would be highly concerned for you. Maybe that's a close-minded view, but when it's illegal, it's generally illegal for a good reason. But it's not illegal in Ireland, so we're good. I generally find that I don't really know what's going on in your entries, mostly because I don't know you or who you're talking about. Sometimes I can identify with the general ideas or occasional emotions which crop up, but mostly I find myself the same way someone who reads my personal site would be: totally confused and with waning interest. I think that, as long as you acknowledge to yourself that you're writing for yourself, then we're just fine. But I didn't really see you saying that anywhere in your writing, or giving the idea that you thought that way. Maybe it seemed that you were writing habitually? I'm not sure. I suppose I can't complain, as I write a lot of the same way, but generally I would say that the points missing are just for the fact that I wasn't personally interested. You write fine, well enough for yourself, and that's good enough for me.
Design: (24/30)
First, I have to take points off for the fact that your older.html page has an entirely different design than your index.html page. Why is that? Isn't it just easier to make them the same for congruency? Second, I don't really see how your design matches your writing or who you are. I mean, I realize that the picture is pretty and I can understand, I dunno, having that as a display picture on MSN messenger or something, but how on earth does the fairy express anything about you? It just doesn't seem to fit the style of who you are. In all honesty, I think that a TV show (perhaps the OC) oriented design would fit you best.
Update: (7/10)
Every three or four days, which isn't too shabby.
Navigation: (4/5)
Fine, except that I had to trial-and-error your previous and next links to find out which is which. Why can't they just be titled "previous" and "next?"
Errors: (4/5)
A broken image at the top of the page?
Contact: (4/5)
Email, Notes, Guestbook.
Bonus: (14/15)
Cast, Quizzes, Where I Live, 101 Things about Me, Rings.
Total: (84/100)
Further Comments:
I don't mean to sound mean. Did I sound mean? I tried not to.
Favorite Quote:
Didn't do this section.
Reviewed by: Valerie