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Content: (25/30)
Started here and ended here. Your entries were...insightful, into a guy's mind. Boy do you go to a lot of shows! Your entries would have been a lot more interesting for me, if I could have known anything more about you than what you write everyday. Your cast page didn't give much information about you, so I felt kind of out of the loop in your entries. I imagine your site is much more interesting to someone who knows you personally. Your entries were a lot more about daily events, unless you were writing about girls, in which case (as it usually was with Desi) you got more emotional and I could really appreciate your entries. That one I linked below was gorgeous. Just so chocked full of emotion that I had to like it. Um, in conclusion, I guess I could say you could either write about girls more...or just if you want to, attempt to put more of your thoughts and emotions down. It's up to you :)
Design: (21/30)
I...don't like it. I don't see how it ties in with you personally, or your writing, in any way. It's a nice design I guess, except that it's awfully wide, and the colors seem a bit off for matching's sake. The font is hard to read and I can't quite figure out why the counter is so far down the page on that column. It's...okay. I guess. Maybe.
Update: (4/10)
I read 10 entries and covered three full months. Not too hot.
Navigation: (4/5)
So confusingly out of order...ahhrg. and Kinda hard to read.
Errors: (5/5)
None.
Contact: (3/5)
Guestbook, Email.
Bonus: (13/15)
Cast, Rings, NotifyList, Counter, and finally I really like your "season" idea.
Total: (75/100)
Further Comments:
Nadda.
Favorite Quote:
This whole entry.
Reviewed by: Valerie