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bluegurl44
12.29.03 at 1:50 p.m.


What do you see when you look in my eyes? the hurt? the emptiness? Yourself?:
(bluegurl44)

Content: (10/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Darlin' you are a drama queen, and your grammar and punctuation is absolutely awful. It murders me to have to read your entries because they just annoy me to take the effort to translate into regular english. I'd say for starters, learn your "Shift" button, and use a spell check and grammar check. Maybe then reading won't be so damn difficult.

Design: (20/30)
Sigh, this template is okay. I don't like how it's so hard to read the words on the background image, and how the scrollbar is so very blue. It's so bright, and it doesn't match. Maybe a blue closer to the color of the eye? It just doesn't seem to fit either, maybe because it has the correct grammar, and your site just does not. Try and find something that matches better.

Update: (6/10)
Every few days.

Navigation: (5/5)
Fine.

Errors: (0/5)
Previous and Next links, Bio link, Lovelies link, Guestbook and Notes links.

Contact: (5/5)
Notes, guestbook, email.

Bonus: (10/15)
Bio, Lovelies.

Total: (60/100)

Further Comments:
Sorry that's so low, but it was such a pain to read your entries the way they're written.

Favorite Quote:
None.

Reviewed by: Valerie

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