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bondagebear
11.15.03 at 2:02 p.m.


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bondagebear

Content: I was amazed at the level of honesty you put into your writing, which is why it made me so pensive to see so many depressing thoughts. I am envious of your writing and your way of thought, although, I must admit, all of the "..." tend to get a little irritating. If I weren't the way I am, I would probably tell you, and myself included, to stop wallowing in self-pity, but I know better, since I think I know how you feel. You have just the right amount of poetic traits to your writing and don't go overboard by //writing\ like;; this, like I've seen so many people do nowadays. You seem like a wonderful person and I really hope things work out for you in the end. {26/30}

Design: Hmm, the word "extravagant" comes to mind. You have an amazing design from PixelScripts that's certain to capture anyone's attention. I like the way the lyrics are incorporated into the picture and the overall organization of the layout. The subtle borders, pictures, and words around the navigation are a really nice touch. {30/30}

Update: You sure update more than I do, but still skip a few days sometimes. {9/10}

Navigation: Your links are arranged in a neat column and should be easy to find, but you have a lot of them and that makes it a little confusing. Maybe putting all of your extra links on your extras page will do the trick. {4/5}

Errors: None that I could really find. {5/5}

Contact: E-mail, notes, guestbook. {5/5}

Bonus: I must say, it was a bitch going through all of your links. {15/15}

Total: 94/100

Favorite Quote: " you rip my heart out... as if a goal..."

Comments: You are beautiful.

Reviewed by Yelena.

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