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calynda
02.06.04 at 10:42 p.m.


Les Larmes de la Rose {ver.2 ~ Hiding in the Light}:
(calynda)

Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Wow, you write quite a bit. It's unfortunate for me to say that I've been rather not looking forward to reviewing you. A long time ago, I came across your site, but it didn't thrill me then, and I was thinking this might be the same experience. I was pleasantly suprised.
I read a bit, I think. Or it seemed like that. I enjoyed hearing about your resolutions the most. I've always wanted to talk about how I did on my last year's resolutions, but never get around to it, and you did, and I enjoyed that. And you didn't just list your resolutions, you actually described them. That was nice too. As for the rest of your entries, they were enjoyable enough. You have a very nice ability to tell stories, so your story entries were great. I would say though, that you often seem to write in a very happy sounding voice. On your bitchy days, I could hardly tell you weren't having the greatest day. I would say your voice needs some variance sometimes as well.

Design: (27/30)
I am impressed! Two templates in all of the time you've been on diaryland. That is great. I wish I were so ambitious (one of my resolutions was one template per month this year). As for this one...it's okay. I don't really like it. The gold is nice, but it's just such a goldenrod color, it's not very gorgeous or bright or anything. I am a fan of whites/blacks and bright colors, so personally this subdued template doesn't really attract me. I love the burgundy of the rose petals and the greens of the leaves though. That I find to be the best part. And I can see how the template ties into your writing through your different entries and your fantacism (fantasies, spelling :)).

Update: (7/10)
Not so often...

Navigation: (5/5)
Sure. The images are great.

Errors: (5/5)
None.

Contact: (4/5)
Email, guestbook.

Bonus: (14/15)
Links, Poetry, Favorites, Rings, Bio, Dreams.

Total: (90/100)

Further Comments:
Johnny Depp is fabulous, isn't he?

Favorite Quote:
None.

Reviewed by: Valerie

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