carlita27016
Content: Right off the bat, I'm a freak when it comes to grammar, even though I don't have such good grammar myself. I think it would have more effect in your writing and look better if you bolded words instead of making them like this: "wiiiiiiickkeddd!!!!!!" That being said, I did enjoy the detail in this entry. I'm not very social, so it's great to see someone else having a good time like that. Hmm, I couldn't really get into your diary. You rarely show any emotion, except for giddiness. It makes me wonder if you lie to yourself about your true feelings, but if not, then I'm glad everything's going well for you. The majority of your diary is day-logging, which is fine, but in moderation; everything just seems so repetitive. You overexaggerate a lot of words and it actually makes your entries really hard to read. {15/30}
Design: I don't like Lillix, but, hey, whatever tickles your pickle. I like the star brushes on the picture, but the orange really doesn't go with that shade of blue; it hurts my eyes. It annoys me that, if your entry is long, the dashed border on the left stops right in the middle. It would be better if you had separate borders for you navigation and your entries. Other than that, I think it reflects your writing and it's all really organized. {24/30}
Update: Well, you certainly update more than I. {10/10}
Navigation: It's all to the left of the entry. {5/5}
Errors: Ooh, the spelling, grammar, and so on. {3/5}
Contact: Notes, e-mail. {5/5}
Bonus: A lot of links on the "Extras" page. {15/15}
Total: 77/100
Favorite Quote: I don't have one.
Comments: I think you actually look better with lighter hair. You say one of your favorite movies is Crazy/Beautiful; I go to the school where it was filmed.
Reviewed by Yelena.