chi-angel
Content: You sound a little immature from your entries, but, hey, maybe it's just me. The one thing I got from your diary is that you sure know what your strengths and weaknesses are. You seem to be really honest with yourself and others, which, I believe, is a really good trait to have. Most of your entries remind me a little of short stories. You tend to have a semi-plot line and are good with important details. I mean, I don't like some of the things you say, but I guess you do have a good way of saying them. It's your diary, so you can write whatever you want and the messages you are trying to convey are always clear. Good job. {29/30}
Design: I don't remember what your old design was but I know I liked it better than this new one. It's by NN Design and the "picture", we'll call it, really isn't that bad. I understand the idea behind it, but the execution could've been a lot better. I like the way everything is set up and don't really mind the pink, except for the fact that it hurts my eyes to read the entries. You said you want to get yourself a new layout, well, I suggest you do that for, if anything, the sake of my eyes. {26/30}
Update: You update pretty much like I do -- and that's not a good thing. {7/10}
Navigation: I actually really like your navigation; it's unique when it comes to diaries. {5/5}
Errors: You have a few grammatical and spelling errors, but they don't really interfere with the clarity of the entry. {5/5}
Contact: 5 different ways. {5/5}
Bonus: Me, them, reviews. {10/15}
Total: 87/100
Favorite Quote: "Yeah, that's it, I just love being jumped on at football games."
Comments: I was so frustrated when I read this, "She thinks she's better than anyone who doesn't try to be like her and expects everyone to like her," and the rest of that paragraph. I don't know if you actually took the time to get to know this girl or not, but I'm assuming you didn't since you say she is new and annoying. Well, let's take a look at this entry, shall we? Read the second paragraph; if you do not see the irony, then you don't even know what you're talking about.
Reviewed by Yelena.