(darceek)
Content: (28/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I read a lot. And I think I was wrong in reading it from present to past, but it still made sense. I read pretty much the entire area with Chris, and I must say, I'm glad to see that you pour all your emotions out when you write. You seem to hold nothing back, and it strengthens the message of each entry. You write a lot--which is nice for allowing the reader to get a full picture of what is going on. When I read your entries, I come away with the feeling that I know the entire story from your side, and nothing is held back. That is really good to read.
Design: (26/30)
This is a nice template, and I find it really matches a lot of your entries on the emotional side. The only thing I don't like about it is how dark the font is--it's almost too difficult to read sometimes and I had to highlight it quite a bit. Also, as a suggestion, widening your text area so that it is under your navigation as well will give the whole page a more uniform feeling.
Update: (7/10)
Pretty often.
Navigation: (5/5)
Excellent.
Errors: (5/5)
Not a one.
Contact: (4/5)
Email, Notes.
Bonus: (11/15)
Quizzes, Reviews, Link.
Total: (86/100)
Further Comments:
your = belonging to you; you're = you are
Favorite Quote:
Today is a new day, and like all days, it's an open door to new possibilities and growth.
Reviewed by: Valerie