Content: ( 29 / 30)
So, I’ve decided from now on to read either the last twenty or twenty-five entries in every diary I review, so I started here. It wasn’t a good place to start. I started with pure boredom, which, honestly, dragged into the next couple entries. You do, however, have a wonderful way of expressing yourself, so as I don’t exactly want to sleep. I enjoy your writing style a lot. Ugh, this is the exact reason that I hate church and am never going again, nor have I gone for the past 2 years. The church angers me, and I like the way you expressed this. You are my type of person (not that I’ll let that sway my review… *cough*). Sometimes, though, your grammar is lacking. A lot of times you don’t capitalize and such. Now, I’m getting to the entries where you’re writing to “babe”, whoever that is. If you have something to say, talk to them. Your diary is not a tool for informing your friends and readers of their problems, it’s for your thoughts and feelings. I could understand you having a commentary about this, but not a letter to someone from your diary. Mmm, Gwen Stefani, she’s hot for sure. Oh my, , this entry is amazingly written, and honestly, you’re definitely getting points for this, as goes for this entry. You express yourself so very well, I’m jealous.
Design: (24 / 30)
First thing I saw was the image. Kudos for that for sure, I love the picture, but the words aren't as loveable in the least. The pink doesn't really fit the picture either. A blue to match her eyes or a red to match her hair would have been a better choice. Mmm, I absolutely adore your designer. That site has some absolutely amazing designs. I love this design but the pink doens't really fit and the loves, hates, and playlists are not really my style, I think they clog up a design. The words on the image also lack something to be desiref. Other than those small things, though, this design is well proportioned, and gorgeous. Oh wait, I just noticed while reading that the entry dates are no where to be found or at least not near the title. Dates would be good.
Update: (10 / 10)
Frequent updates and such. No complaints on my part.
Navigation: (5 / 5)
Everything seems in order.
Errors: (4 / 5)
You need dates on each entry, but that’s all. Put the code in the template. That’s all I see, though.
Contact: (5 / 5)
Notes, guestbook, email.
Bonus: (4 / 15)
Um, you have none except for the loves, hates, and playlist. I decided I like you, though, I’m in a good mood, and lots of extras are annoying anyway, so I’ll give you a couple points.
Further Comments: You have a beautiful writing style. I’m jealous of the way you can express yourself. Your score, however, doesn’t seem to reflect it, though.
Final Score: (81 / 100)
Reviewer: Charlotte