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Content: (30/30)
Started here and ended here. I read your diary from a very interesting perspective, in that I am a pregnant 17-year-old, and will be giving my daughter up for adoption when she's born in March. Reading about you as the daughter adopted was interesting and thought-provoking, simply because I can't help but feel we have a bizarre kinship because of it. That, and of course, you write exceptionally well, and even your fight against circumcision (can't spell, sorry) was a thrilling literary entry. I enjoyed hearing about the interplays between you, your mother, Rachel, the husband, the kids, the neighbor...etc. You have a really interesting diary, and I spent lots of time reading into your history. Great job!
Design: (29/30)
A pretty J Design (which I'm too lazy to link up). I like how the ribbons don't move when the entry does, because I love stationary backgrounds. Anyway, this entry fits because...the colors, I think. I associate colors with emotion (which I'm sure most of us do) and your entries, when read in a gloop like I read them, are all different but elegantly placed together. You choose the important stories and highlight them, and that's what this design reminds me of. I suppose then, that I very much like it for your site.
Update: (10/10)
Well! You missed New Years Day! Shame... hah, no, you write daily now.
Navigation: (5/5)
Very well organized, and easy to understand/navigate.
Errors: (5/5)
Nadda!
Contact: (5/5)
Notes, guestbook, email, AIM.
Bonus: (12/15)
Cast, Baby L., Baby E. (both babies, I read), Wishlist.
Total: (97/100) <---WOW! That's a shiny score...
Further Comments:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! :)
Favorite Quote/Entry:
Both Parts, and this was a hard decision to make.
Reviewed by: Valerie