(emofuckup)
Content: (29/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Haha, not as an insult, but I love the fact that you don't write very long entries. I've been reviewing long entry people a lot lately, and I like some spice-of-life. In the meantime, There were some certain phrases, and just emotions I couldn't necessarily feel myself, but I could tell through your writing that you were feeling them. It was honest emotion, and I am going to be the second to cheer for your at not cutting in two months. That is a great accomplishment. I will also say that I loved how you would switch person-tenses from different entry to different entry. You would write about a person in one entry, and then to them in the next, and I think this is the first time I've seen that. I really like that idea.
I also liked how you have excellent punctuation. Some people who don't capitalize neglect the regular punctuation as well, and it was nice to see you got all the commas well placed. I'd say that also, your writing really matches your template, so more kudos for that.
Design: (24/30)
I love Blink-182, so I love the lyrics to this design, but I am not too much a fan of the colors. I have a 1024x786 resolution, and from where I sit, even the lyrics in the bottom right corner are too small, and too narrow (the font itself). The stars (brush) are a neat idea, but they're such obscure blue shades that on the background, I am just not a big fan. Last gripe, the DIARYLAND button in the bottom corner. I know you know better! Throw that link up in your dropdown menu and call it a day. Please.
Update: (8/10)
Every few days. I'd say that's good.
Navigation: (4/5)
Drop down menus are okay.
Errors: (5/5)
Not-a-one.
Contact: (4/5)
Notes, Email.
Bonus: (15/15)
Reviews, LJ, Extras, Photos, Rings, Reads, Readers...
Total: (89/100)
Further Comments:
Nothing again.
Favorite Quote:
"darling, you must be wearing sunglasses. look at me, im far from perfect. "
This is absolutely honest, and while it's a sad view of yourself, it's extremely well-written.
Reviewed by: Valerie