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Content: (18/30)
Started here and ended on the index. (I also read a couple of older entries.) I took me a while to get used to your style of writing. You didn't lure me in. You do write very openly though and occasionally, you even say something smart. I do think you're trying to grow up a little too fast. You're still very young, you shouldn't worry about men so much just yet. It's like your diary is one big entry about your trouble with boys. Why don't you write about other things that are going on in your life? I know you saidsomewhere that you mainly write for yourself, but since you submit your diary to review sites I must conclude you do care about other visitors as well. I think it will be much more interesting if you change topic more often. I am glad you don't mention your sex life so much anymore, those entries freaked me out, mainly because you are so young.
I don't think I'll ever visit your diary again. It just didn't click.
Design: (15/30)
I'm missing something here, I think it would be better if you made the right column narrower (I think the wide tagboard distracts from the entry) and put up a top image or something. The fact that your scrollbars are not the same color bothers me. Same goes for the different template on the archives page, I like it when everything matches.
I'm not too keen on the graphics for "entry date" etc. either. However, I've seen a lot worse and I like that you coded it yourself.
Update: (9/10)
Very often! Missing some days, but you don't take long breaks.
Navigation: (4/5)
I think it would be better if you put up a link to your archives on the mainpage.
Errors: (5/5)
I didn't see any.
Contact: (5/5)
Notes, Guestbook, Email, Comments
Bonus: (12/15)
Rings, Cast, 101 Things List, Entry Profile, Listings
Total: (68/100)
Further Comments:
I don't find the first two pictures on your entry profile appropriate at all. I mean, for God's sake, you're only 16!
Favorite Quote:
Love is a feeling to stay, that continues through anger, through pain, through happiness, through shock, angst, want, lust, hate, and disgust. Love stands.
Reviewed by: Nemain