gracestgrace
Content: You are quite entertaining and have the strangest things to say. It's okay, I don't mind. You should actually go in further into matters when you're talking about something; you just state a fact or an opinion without giving any background information or backing it up at all. It'd be better if you devoted one entry to only one or two things, like this one, not ten. Ironically enough, it annoys the hell out of me when you talk about how annoying other people are. I like the way you throw in song lyrics into your entries, but you actually got a line from "Iris" by the Goo Goo Dolls wrong. Your diary would be so much better if you wrote about personal affairs, and not about random things that just pop into your mind. {23/30}
Design: You explained the whole "Fun Slide" thing in one of your entries, so I can now see the significance of the picture. I don't really like it, but you do, and that's all that matters. Getting to the actual layout, I don't know why there is a gray border around everything and the pink background color of the entry does not match at all. Your font is very large, but I got used to it after a while. It's not a bad layout, but I think you should change the shade of pink and make everything more organized. {24/30}
Update: Like myself, you skip a lot of days. {6/10}
Navigation: Your diary is very cluttered and your links are damn near impossible to find. The blue line doesn't really do much to separate the entry from the links and they don't stand out at all. I recommend you either change the link color or move them up to the top. {1/5}
Errors: Spelling and grammar. {4/5}
Contact: Notes, guestbook, e-mail. {5/5}
Bonus: Reviews, birthday countdown, pirates ring. {6/15}
Total: 69/100
Favorite Quote: "Ha...You know those trucker hats that say "Dawgs" on them that they were selling at school? Well the weekend after I got one I wore it practically nonstop and I was listening to this song on Kazaa because I couldn't really remember how it went. So I was sitting there and it said 'Take off that silly ass hat.' And I was very excited."
Comments: I haven't really been at the computer lately, so I'm sorry if the review took a while to get done.
Reviewed by Yelena.