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Valerie - 21yo
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groupie94
08.17.03 at 11:38 a.m.


Someone's out there, wishing they were me:
(groupie94)

Content: (28/30)
Started here and ended on the index. The only problem I found in your writing was that personally I couldn't connect to it. I have a feeling that many adults or at least older teenagers would understand your writing, as it is both eloquent and entertaining, but for me, the topics didn't strike close. As I said, your writing is excellent, all grammar and punctuation (and etc.) are fine. You write often enough and your entries are interesting. What more can I say?

Design: (27/30)
This template is cute, but I personally don't like it. The font dissappears on the image because of the color with it (making my own templates, I fight that all the time). Everything matches really well, but I don't see why the guestmap gets its own button. I think a text link would do fine for that. Also maybe that banner at the bottom could be on an extras page instead of the main page.

Update: (8/10)
Just about every day.

Navigation: (5/5)
Perfectly fine.

Errors: (5/5)
Not a problemo.

Contact: (5/5)
Book, Notes, Email.

Bonus: (15/15)
Rings, Photos, Bio, Links, Recommend, Counter, Guestmap....

Total: (93/100)

Further Comments:
Nope not really. Nice site though. I loved seeing that picture of Spencer on the index I went to :)

Reviewed by: Valerie

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