(hilseymour)
Content: (28/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Ugh the older page looks terrible: grey on white?? Fix that! Rahahah! I love British slang. It's so very different from english, or rather American, and it definately adds to your voice on your writing. I also liked how some of your characters were really strong (like Peter and Pip). I just felt like I knew them from reading, and that is a cool skill in your writing.
Design: (27/30)
Meh. I don't really like it. It's so childish I think. I realize you're a rainbow fan, but it's just not the same feeling as your site. I was wary of reviewing you because of it. I love the colors, and how everything is arranged, but I just don't like how it's not as matching as it could be, to your writing.
Update: (7/10)
Not too often.
Navigation: (5/5)
I like it.
Errors: (5/5)
Nadda.
Contact: (5/5)
Guestbook, Notes, Instant messengers.
Bonus: (15/15)
Links, Googles, Auctions, Rings, Cast, Nano-2003, Stats, etc.
Total: (92/100)
Further Comments:
Hmm...Sorry, none.
Favorite Quote:
Again, none.
Reviewed by: Valerie