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icthus9000
12.08.04 at 8:14 p.m.


The life and times ofa teenage girl:
(icthus9000)

Content: (29/30)
Started here and ended here. You....You are Normal! I love it. You are bonafide normal, an equal balance of all parts in your life and I am way too excited to finally find someone so balanced as you. You master balancing your religion, your passions, your drama and boys, your school...all of it. Good for you! I enjoyed your entries quite a bit, though I do confess I read it the way I read a book I'm partially interested in (read first sentence of each paragraph, read the interesting paragraphs to me), but I did read quite a lot of the entries I chose to read. Your emotions and thoughts and other fun things that you do are all equal parts in your diary, and I enjoyed them. Your days seem interesting (prolly cuz when you write, it's been a while and you have a lot to say), but I could keep up with your life and with waht was going on. I of course didn't know everyone you talked about, and I enjoyed seeing your emotional dilemmas (for example, with Nolt). I would say you have an excellent read. Great job!

Design: (25/30)
SNOOOPY!. I like this design a lot. I think it fits your writing because your writing is a combination of classic problems for someone your age and the fun times in your life (like snoopy!). The colors and design are quite nice, and I like this design quite a lot except for that which I mentioned in the navigational section. It fits your writing style fairly well (sometimes I don't really see how it is connected, being without title or anything, but it is a good design nonetheless.

Update: (5/10)
Gulp...not often at all! I read over a month and half in 12 entries! Thats one entry (on average) every 3 days. Not good at all!

Navigation: (3/5)
It would be easier if it were outside of the entry box so I don't have to scroll for it. That got tedious.

Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.

Contact: (3/5)
Notes, Email, Guestbook.

Bonus: (15/15)
Picture, Friends, Diaryrings, Poetry, Prose, Links, Reviews, Bio.

Total: (85/100)

Further Comments:
Nadda.

Favorite Quote:
"I think it's funny that Santa Clause went through the drive through in an old car with Mrs. Clause in the front seat, and his total for a cheeseburger and chicken tender kid's meal came out to $6.66.
"Things never cease to amuse me."

Reviewed by: Valerie

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