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jendra
2001-12-04 at 12:27 p.m.


link: jendra.diaryland.com

reviewer: cherry

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layout: 9/20. its a template. i don't get the title of the page @ in the browser bar 'candle in the hurricane' it sounds a little too melodramatic for me. move the counter to the bottom of the page, it looks very out of place and so does your mood. semi-nice organization, i dont like how the bottom just has random things thrown everywhere. im a HECKLER for neatness. why is the font of your last 5 entries times new roman but nothing else on your page is? ewe. messy.

content: 17/20. you have all the basic things needed, not to mention a few bonuses. i like the dream thing but can i make one suggestion? make the font on your older.html page smaller. its big enough to eat me. oh- and i dont understand why there's a GUESTBOOK and a SLAMBOOK and a NOTES OPTION and an EMAIL OPTION. do people really participate in all those things? id get rid of either the guestbook or slambook.

updates: 8/10. youre pretty good at updating your diary about every day. i like the way the title of your entries are catchy and the way you write. i actually read most of your pieces without falling asleep!

errors: 4/5. shouldnt that white RIGHT arrow be a link to your index instead of links? i thought those were the previous/next arrows.

overall diversity: 15/20. you write well. you have a good handle on things and a nice perspective.

would i come back: 3/5.

overall impression: 12/20.

total: 68/100

comment: needs some work. why dont you try your own webdesigning too? you seem creative enough.



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