(jordanslost)
Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. You had exactly 10 entries when I read this, so at least that was lucky. Though your page is indefinately screwed over by the Diaryland template, the writing can be very good. Several times, just the way you scripted a sentence was much amazing. The key is combining all of those great moments into every entry.
Design: (15/30)
Blegh! Diaryland Template. I think this is self explanitory for why it is so bad. It's no expression of you. Here are some suggestions: I make templates at Castpier, and there are tons of templates at Beautify. Everyone makes templates. Go find one.
Update: (?/10)
Unknown?
Navigation: (5/5)
Yeah.
Errors: (5/5)
No.
Contact: (0/5)
None.
Bonus: (0/15)
None.
Total: (52/90) (due to Update section)
Further Comments:
Get more stuff, like a template!
Favorite Quote:
"and i know she felt the same way as she crossed her legs in the pale light, and it was all we could do to fall into a hopelessly romantic high school love story."
Reviewed by: Valerie