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kayrayne29
02.03.06 at 10:25 a.m.


What you never wanted to know, but I'm telling you anyway...:
(kayrayne29)

Content: (28/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Most of your entries are about the adventures you've been on, including some photo entries and other fun things like that. I read some of your entries a long time ago, and they reflected the dark design you had before. These entries are much lighter and stronger. You have definately grown a lot in the last year, looking at your last few entries about the changing year. I think that your entries are pretty good. When you sit down and really focus on the content, your stories are amazing. They're interesting and captivating and I really enjoyed reading them. There aren't many suggestions that I can make other than explaining pictures and activities associated to them a little more. THat's the basis of a photo entry. Beyond that, great job!

Design: (27/30)
This is a really cute design, courtesy of FS Designs (even though I've heard shady things about them). The design itself is very funcional; I expect no less from a design site. The colors and formatting all look great, the navigation is clean, and your entries are always long enough to fill the space properly. This design has a great theme for your entries, because you talk a lot about The Ex and moving beyond him. It's a good design, and I like it much better than the dark one you had a few months ago.

Update: (6/10)
Pretty infrequently. There is a lot of space and therefore confusion about the cohesiveness of events. That is pretty important to me: all the entries should fit together chronologically.

Navigation: (5/5)
Yes, yes, perfectly fine!

Errors: (5/5)
Not any that I found.

Contact: (5/5)
Email, Notes, Guestbook, Address!

Bonus: (15/15)
Oh, tons. Banners and photos and rings, and about and cast, and many more!

Total: (91/100)

Further Comments:
Great job!

Favorite Quote:
Didn't have one.

Reviewed by: Valerie

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