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kentuckygyrl
2002-12-04 at 7:33 p.m.


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kentuckygyrl
Content: {5/30} I can only see one entry, i cannot find anyway to get to your arcives page. The one entry I can see i will try and judge on... It is all in capitals, with bad grammer and spelling 'nothing' 'cuzins?' Also don't type in short form, or 'txt' form as well call it here, eg. R - instead of are... sorry but i can live with it once or tiwce but yous whole one entry is like that.. I sounds harsh but its a view i share with many..

Design: {20/30} - Its not a design i love or would praise hugely, orange and purple can look ok together in moderation which it is but it still isn't a template i would use but that is personal choice. It is a design by Rainfalls which I have never heard of but they have some ok templates..

Update:. {1/10} - I don't have a clue how often you update, I can't get to your archives page however i try, and i can't move between entries. I can give you a point for writing one day ago i think... but you need to sort the older.html page out so we can see your past entries..

Navigation: {5/5} - Easy, all at the top.. simple - you get full points here

Errors:.{1/5} - The guestbooks layout does not match, though then again the older page does not have the olderentries showing on it and doesn't match the main page... Spelling and punctuation is a big problem too..

Contact: {5/5} - Tagboard, Email, Guestbook, Yahoo, Msn, Aim

Bonus: {5/15} - A tag board. Try adding a bio page or a cast page to tell the readers more about you...

Total: 42/100 - This does reflect the diary or what i can find of it, make some changes like fixing the older.html page and request another review in 2003, i'm sure you can do, and feel you can do better... - Sorry it has taken so long to get to you

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