kerrierw
Content: Well, you have a few spelling mistakes, but they don't interfere with the clarity of your writing. Your entries have a lot of honesty in them, but they're not over the top like most of the diaries I read. This entry is a good example, I think. It's subtle, but you say everything that needs to be said and make it sound interesting. I like the way you connect things in your entries and associate them with one another. Your entries are pretty much day-logs, but I don't really mind, even though I usually do. You add a bit of humor to everything you say and don't write in the preprogrammed I did this and went there at this time on this day with this person way. You actually get into the details of some things and leave the unimportant things out. What I don't like about that, though, is that you don't really write about personal experiences, but just the fact that you went somewhere or that your mom said this. Try to add a bit more thought to your entries and they'll be a lot better. {27/30}
Design: I am not a fan of pink, but I love this design every time I see it. I don't know, maybe it's just the assumed feeling of riding in a convertible with my bra off. The quote "Be free!" adds a lighthearted, amusing touch to the layout and I love the stars and dashed borders at the sides of the picture and navigation bar. The colors are almost perfect and everything is well organized. I've got to admit, the way your date and time is set up is a bit confusing to me, but, hey, whatever tickles your pickle. The only things that really bother me are the rainbow buttons next to all of your links; they don't really go with the mood of the layout. {29/30}
Update: You certainly update more than I do, that's for sure. {9/10}
Navigation: Crystal clear. {5/5}
Errors: None that I could find. {5/5}
Contact: E-mail, guestbook, notes, etc. {5/5}
Bonus: Rings, reviews, favourites, poems, stories, doodles, photos, dream diary, grunge reviews, s/v book. {15/15}
Total: 95/100
Favorite Quote: "I'm going to start enjoying life. Or at least watching more simpsons."
Comments: I like one of your poems. I'm not sure, but I think it's called "Hmmm".
Reviewed by Yelena.