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Content: (26/30)
Started here and ended on the index. While I'm not the biggest fan of the things you spend your time doing, I think I can set that aside enough to review your content clearminded. You seem to day log a lot more than you put emotion into your entry, but you have a pretty good balance. I enjoy day logs for the most part, because I write one too. So while I could suggest that on some days, you really do need more emotion, for the most part you have enough. Your entries are also really full of your thoughts and other emotionally important events, so I would say that is good. Your slang is interesting, because I read several British writers (I'm not sure if you're British though, but I know you're not American), and your slang is even more than theirs. I can understand it simply because it's not hard to guess what the words mean, but it does add a spark of uniqueness to your writing. I guess in conclusion, at the end of every entry, if you feel like you've missed some major emotional points in your day, make sure to include them with your daily events. It will give a more-rounded read to the audience.
Design: (24/30)
I...don't really like it. For one, I read through a time when you seem to not be with anyone, and have some bitterness towards your last significant other. And this is a romantic template, even if it is black/white/morbid. The lyrics are nice, the whole design looks really good, but I just can't see how it really relates to where you are right now as a writer/person. If you're a layout whore, abuse the privledges and always have a template that matches your life :)
Update: (8/10)
Pretty regularly. Missing a few days here or there, and making it up elswhere. Not so bad.
Navigation: (5/5)
Easy navigation. Perfecto.
Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.
Contact: (4/5)
Email, notes, guestbook.
Bonus: (15/15)
"The girl, cast, diaryrings, quizzes, readers, photos, tickers, links, reviews."
Total: (87/100)
Further Comments:
Song of the Review: Round Here by Counting Crows
Favorite Quote:
"I want a second chance, I want so much to make things right."
"I hate couples. With all their holding hands, cuddling and kissing. Stupid affectionate bastards. Yes, I am just jealous."
Reviewed by: Valerie