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kristeenah
01.04.05 at 1:22 p.m.


White Rose:
(kristeenah)

Content: (25/30)
Started here and ended here. I have to say that I skimmed most of the entries of yours that I read. Please don't be offended, but it's how I do most reviews. I read the first sentence of every paragraph, and if it interests me, I carry on through that paragraph until the next one. Anyway, while I found your living and accomodations situation in Europe/Southeast Asia to be extremely fascinating, the rest of your life didn't really spark interest for me. I have no doubt that you don't really write for anyone else though, so I suppose that is to be expected. Due to the great spans of time that passed between your entries, I also found it rather hard to keep up with what was going on in your life (2 months is a long time to go between entries!). When you began writing more often in December, I found that I could follow the activites of your life a lot more easily and enjoyed reading far more. PS, why are winter coats in Holland so ugly?

Design: (23/30)
The design is pretty. I just got myself reviewed by a site that had this for a design, so I pretty well like it. The colors all look good, the navigation and entry boxes are well-organized. I must say the only thing I don't quite like about it is how it's called "white rose," but that rose isn't white! It's peach or pink or something, but definately not white. The background is white... Oh well, anyway, since this design is obviously new (you mentioned it as being new) and a lot of the entries I read aren't new, I can't quite tell if it does fit your writing or not. I suppose it is pretty, and you always say "ciao, bella" at the end of the entries... Yes, that works for now :) Good enough pick for me, I suppose.

Update: (4/10)
Um, not too good, as I went roughly 11 or 12 entries back, and was in July...

Navigation: (5/5)
Easy as PIE. Cheese pie too.

Errors: (5/5)
Nadda.

Contact: (5/5)
Notes, email, and a contact page. Could they all be together instead of some in Nav. and some on another page?

Bonus: (15/15)
About you, Imood, Counter, Rings, Reviews, Extras, Buddies, Photos...

Total: (82/100)

Further Comments:
Nadda.

Favorite Quote:
"We are not going out. But i don't know if we classify as siblings, people who should be going out but arent, people who think tehyre in love but are just idiots, or if itsw some sort of Love-Hate relationship."

Reviewed by: Valerie

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