(kyle-j)
Content: (23/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I really didn't want to review your diary. Did you get that vibe? Because I was trying to give it off. I...well, you disappont me, mostly because I have a feeling that heading to college next year means that I will meet quite a lot of people who seem so angry and upset all the time, like you are. You're fairly decent at telling stories, and I can see that people who know you (aka the people that regularly read your site) would find you funny, but I really don't. You just sound angry and mean. You don't daylog so much, which is nice, nor do you put a lot of emotion and thoughts into your entries, which isn't so nice. I did appreciate your assertiveness though, it was one of the strongest qualities of your writing. You're clear about what you are saying, and I especially appreciated the need for straight-pride parades. Keep up the strength of voice in your writing, and I'm sure that you'll do well. As a reviewer, I had a hard time getting into it, but oh well, that happens sometimes.
Design: (28/30)
Yeah I can see how this fits your site. There's poor grammar in the title of the design too (life and timeS). The design is absurd in a kyle-j kind of way (sort of like that odd orange design you had a few months ago). I would say this fits you very well, mostly because it doesn't make any sense to me!
Update: (6/10)
Yeah...not so hot here.
Navigation: (5/5)
Easy, fine.
Errors: (5/5)
Nah.
Contact: (2/5)
Notes.
Bonus: (10/15)
Friends, Reviews.
Total: (79/100)
Further Comments:
The title of your diary has poor grammar in it. Please fix.
Favorite Quote:
Nadda.
Reviewed by: Valerie