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liadlaith
10.22.03 at 6:55 p.m.


. . . Stripped Bare
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Content: Some of your entries actually got a chuckle out of me; that's rare, you should feel special. I am younger than you, but can still relate to a lot of the things you write. I don't know if it's the actual experience, opinion, and feeling, or if it's simply the way you write it, I just know that I understand. I was sitting here and waiting for a not-so-good entry, "Come on, nonsense or poor grammar," but it never came! "Whoa... the index." You are a wonderful writer, your word choice is impeccable; you should write a novel. No, scratch that; you must write a novel. {30/30}

Design: As stated on your design page, I really like your "umm . . . bright colour scheme". The colors are vibrant, yet calming, and happen to go very well together. I like the simple contrast of blues in the entry borders and the actual text color. I like the way your links are arranged to the side and the position of the previous/next entry links. You don't really see that around Diaryland. {30/30}

Update: "Holy crap, you're the anti-christ!" is what I would say if I believed in a higher power. {10/10}

Navigation: The words "ooh-la-la" come to mind, I'm not exactly sure why. {5/5}

Errors: Either you're naturally prone to perfection, or you're really obsessive with your diary. {5/5}

Contact: E-mail, guestbook, notes. {5/5}

Bonus: Cast, easy envelope, Soap-Box, reviews, etc. {15/15}

Total: 100/100 - Wow, the first 100% I've ever given out, and I've been reviewing for, how long? A year?!

Favorite Quote: "I’ve also got a sore throat, so maybe I’m getting sick. More likely, I realise, I’m probably just getting my period. Thank god. It’s been too long, I was beginning to think I was pregnant or something (your guess is as good as mine as to how that would come about, given present circumstances.)"

Comments: I love your One Hundred Things, although it was really 99, as you so nonchalantly pointed out. You don't say, "I'm 20. My favorite color is purple. I have a dog," but you actually go into detail and let your readers know some quite interesting things.

Reviewed by Yelena.

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