(lifeineminor)
Content: (29/30)
Started here and ended on the index. My goodness, I am proud of you. If I read correctly, you're only a first-year high schooler, and you really impress me. You're intellegent and well spoken and you're very observant of what's going on in the world around you. Your entries, while lacking in the basic niceties of usual details like who's entirely who (while you did have a cast page), were interesting enough to keep me reading through them. In all honesty, I would greatly consider reading a good bit more of your diary on my own time (though I'm not sure I have the time at right this moment, I will bookmark you for later perusal). Anyway, for suggestions, as I've mentioned, I find greater understanding of a stranger when they give me names and places (even if they are bullshit names and vague places), because that, for me, helps me connect with the writer (for example, I have a girl on my list who I think I only really started reading because she was interested in a guy named Colin at the same time that I was, just funny stuff like that). That would be my suggestion, as you cover all of the other things that makes reading a new site enjoyable to me.
Design: (26/30)
Hm.. I like it! I've seen places that have that view of NYC, and NYC is a glorious place. I hope you have a fun trip there! The design is well done, except that (picky, picky) I'm so not a fan of the font. Also, why does the first paragraph have a bigger font size than all the others? Is that on purpose, because I really don't like it. Beyond that, I think I like it generally well, and considering you are in NYC right now, it's very fitting.
Update: (6/10)
Er... not so great. Generally, your entries don't require a lot of consistency, though as a daily-writer, I always enjoy more writing as opposed to less.
Navigation: (5/5)
Oh yes, that's fine and easy to use.
Errors: (3/5)
Your extras link! *gasp*
Contact: (4/5)
Notes, Email.
Bonus: (5/15)
Art. Unfortunately, as mentioned above, that extras link didn't lead me anywhere, so I can't give more points in this section.
Total: (78/100) <--- ouch! I'm sorry. It was that extras link that got you.
Further Comments:
I really think your username is interesting. I like it a lot.
Favorite Quote:
"And with that, he has to "run." He always has to "run" lately. Always."
Reviewed by: Valerie