Content: (17/30)
Started here and ended at the most recent entry. You use dumb slang like "fam". Seriously, were the first three letters just soooo taxing on your fingers that you couldn't type the last three? I doubt it. You also use internet slang. You are in your twenties from what I can tell. You are too old for internet slang. Hell, I'm 16 and I am too old for internet slang. You use too many exclamations points. What you are saying is not an exclamation, and therefore requires PERIODS. You just sound so much younger than you acctually are when you write. If you didn't talk about work and paying your bills, I'd think you were 14 or 15. You can't spell very well either and it's irritating. Your diary, over all, sounds young and it's a bunch of daylogs. I don't get it. You need to learn to spell properly, not use slangs, and write something other than daylogs. You, however, are not the worst I've read and I will give you credit for that.
Design: (24/30)
I don't think I could possibly LOVE your layout any more. Audrey is a doll and Breakfast at Tiffany's is my favorite. I think you went a little far naming your diary lolamae, but I guess I can deal with it. There's only a couple mistakes. The image on top is a few pixels off the image on the bottom. It shows on the left side. Also, the list of buddies is long and clutterd. You'd be a lot better off and the page would look a lot cleaner if you just put a link that said "buddies" and put them on their own page. Other than that, I'm am absolutely madly in love with your design. Credit to Francey Designs. Also, YOUR PREVIOUS AND NEXT LINKS ARE IN A BAD BAD BAD PLACE! Move them so they're easier to find.
Update: (8/10)
I can't really tell. You need to put dates on your older entries page, and it would be a lot easier to see. But as I read through your entries, I saw your updates were pretty regular.
Navigation: (4/5)
Easy. Works fine. My only complaint is the clutter of the buddy list.
Errors: (4/5)
None that I can find. I am taking off one point for the lack of dates on the older entries page, because, to me, that's an error.
Contact: (3/5)
Email and Notes.
Bonus: (10/15)
Cast, Webrings, Buddies. Not much, but I don't like extras. Too bad it's in the scoring and I have to take away points.
Total: (70/100)
Further Comments:
You sound young. That's it. Improve that. Stop it with the slang (BTW, bro, fam, etc.) and write more than daylogs.
Favorite Quote:
Ooh, Alvin and the chipmunks..... Christmas, Christmas, time for cheer.....Please Christmas don't be late...........I still want a hulahoop...!
Reviewed by: Charlotte