Content: (15/30)
Started here. You know, it would be cool if you made any sense. Oh em gee. The next entry is some crappy lyrics. My Chemical Romance = worst band ever. You don't make any sense to me. Your entries are piecey and don't seem like a real diary as much as they seem like some random disconnected thoughts you just decided to post on the internet. What the hell is this? There's no picture or anything, just a bunch of arrows. Fix that. Stop concentrating on the past. It's not flattering. You need to move on with your life. I am sorry but you are an idiot. I've had my heart broken too, but dwelling like this is ridiculous. This diary makes it seem like Jake and your mom are the only people you know and that you sit at home in your room all day crying about Jake. Last but not least, DROP THE LYRICS. They're not good and they're not even your words. I could understand a couple lines with an explanation to how they apply, but a whole song? That's stupid. You're boring.
Design: (23/30)
First thing I saw was the image. Kudos for that for sure, I love the picture, but the words aren't as loveable in the least. It could be becasue I don't like that band. A blue to match her eyes or a red to match her hair would have been a better choice for the words, too. The pink just doesn't match. I know you took the image from this designer because I already reviewed someone with this image. Give credit where credit is do (-5 points.) Other than those things, though, I really like your design. I assume it was self made since there's no design link. The only complaint is that this is really amatuer html (-2 points). Oh well.
Update: (10/10)
Um, way too fucking often. I've seen 5 in one day. Enough said. You are weird.
Navigation: (2/5)
Simple. That's it. I really hate not having obvious names for the links though. They don't tell me where they go and I hate that.
Errors: (4/5)
None really. A few broken links, typos, and some poor grammar.
Contact: (2/5)
Comments. Bleh.
Bonus: (11/15)
You have some OK bands. You have extra links. Good job. (dripping sarcasm)
Total: (67/100)
Further Comments:
You're boring.
Favorite Quote:
None.
Reviewed by: Charlotte