(lovesuximsad)
Content: (15/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I'm going to gouge you here for the tagboard. Get it off the main page. Get the music gone. I don't even have speakers, but I can't stand sites with music. If you love music so much, make a playlist page and list your songs. Most people don't like to hear your music when they surf around. I know I always have on my own music when I review, so this was just tedious. Now onto your entries...
I'm sorry. I can't seem to find out how old you are, but I'm deeply disappointed that A) you spent the night at your boyfriend's house, and B) you're "saving it" until your one year. ONE YEAR? I'm sorry, that just lowers my opinion of you as a person. Looking at the rest of your entries--sometimes you TALK directly TO people in the entry. What is that? You are not writing a letter, you're writing an entry. The point is to politely pretend no one is reading and then be really happy when they leave you comments and notes that remind you that they are reading. Also, don't talk so much about the drama of your life. Time is temporary. Your spats with Nicole and other chicas are minor. Rather, write about maybe, a learning experience you encountered due to the fight (for instance, "I hope that I am not like that, blah blah blah, and here's what I'm going to do to try and not be like that.")
Design: (25/30)
A Dee Design. I Don't know. It's..okay. I really don't like the purple color. And looking at the image (that is a cute Hello Kitty however), I don't see how the purple even matches. That blue she has on would match, and I think would look much better on the site. Of course that's a designers pick. Next, I would say the older page has way too much information for each entry. There's so much going on with the underline, overline and []s that it's confusing when I'm looking at dates/shortdescriptions/times. I would say to pick one way of highlighting them, and leaving it at that, for instance bolding them.
I'm not really sure how this template fits your writing. I can see how it would match towards Halloween, but it's been almost four months since that (great) night, and you have this template in the middle of February. May I suggest a more seasonal template?
Update: (5/10)
You haven't updated since the 12th! That's a long while.
Navigation: (4/5)
Simple enough. I don't like how the "reviews and such" takes up two lines though.
Errors: (4/5)
Just a few failed buttons on your reviews page..
Contact: (5/5)
Email, Notes, Guestbook.
Bonus: (12/15)
Reviews, Rings, AIM.
Total: (70/100)
Further Comments:
Nope.
Favorite Quote:
Not one.
Reviewed by: Valerie
song of the review: buried myself alive -- the used