(luckyhottie)
Content: (26/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I can start straight out by saying that your life is uber complicated for a 12-year-old. Crazy crazy. I think you may outrank me and some of my friends as being boy-crazy when we were 12 :D.
I swear, you sound like a high-schooler from the dillemas you have! What happened to young-age of innocence? I wish I had the simple life of your life though. I'm super glad you don't write here in the same fashion that you talk via conversations, because that internet slang is dreadful for the eyes, and sometimes, typing the words for real is way easier. Anyway, I liked to read yours a bit. You did talk about your day a whole lot, and way too much about Artie I think. If you're trying to not like him, try to not write about him :). But if you're trying to like him, go for it!
Anyway, it's all your site, so if you're down with the way it is, then keep it. I do think that perhaps a little more true emotion might spice up your writing. Be absolutely sincere always and your writing will rock.
Design: (23/30)
This is a moderately cool template. The colors are just so bland sometimes though! It's nice and pastel, and an Alee Design, but I really don't like it. It's clean and matches sure, but I don't see a) how it fits your writing all that well, or b) how it is interesting or spicy as a page for you. It just seems like it matches what you want. Not what/who you are.
Update: (6/10)
Not too often.
Navigation: (5/5)
Pretty good.
Errors: (5/5)
None.
Contact: (5/5)
Email, notes, guestbook.
Bonus: (15/15)
AIM, fans, reviews, extras, loves, bio, hates, counters, links...
Total: (85/100)
Further Comments:
Don't think I was picking on you for your age, I assure you I wasn't. I just couldn't see how it fit. If you want to drop me a line, please do, I'd love to hear from you (bitch me out if you want! :D)
Favorite Quote:
"Anyways, This is probably the first and only time I'm ever going to say this, but I feel pretty. My self esteem has gotten so much higher in the past month. This entry is going to sound very conceited, but whatever. I don't really give a crap. It's my diary and i'm not going to hide how I feel."
Reviewed by: Valerie