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meanpony
03.30.04 at 8:49 p.m.


Hi, Everybody!:
(meanpony)

Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Wow. You write, um, a lot. I hate to say it, but your writing, while I read it, just doesn't appeal to me. First of all, I searched and searched for your age, because I find this weird comfort in A) knowing the age a writer writes at and B) knowing their real age so I can sort of think about the two. I at least found that you're post-High School, and that gives me some comfort. You write like you're post-HS, so I could definately sort of look for insight in your writing (myself being almost post-HS). I did find though, that I just didn't connect with your characters and stories the way I do with some people. I say you have a good talent at writing, otherwise you wouldn't (still) be doing it. It doesn't happen to fit my taste, but I definately say you write very well. I'd say your writing (like my own) is probably best suited for people who have known you longer and read a heck of a lot more entries than I did.

Design: (27/30)
Right. I love the Simpsons. Very excellent show. I don't happen to like the rather tremendous amounts of purple on the background though. It makes me think of a fifties-style dress. The purple of the image is good--I like that, but the background is sooooo...dotty! Okay, moving on. Colors--great. The double underlines of the menu look really good, and I like the fact that your links are the same color as your entries, only bold (I have that too). This is a nice template, of course. One thing I will say is that beyond your quotes, I don't see how the your content and design connect. That is something I look for vaguely, and I don't see it here. Hm. I think part of the reason I don't see this connection is because I don't connect with your entries, so I'm going to invalidate the comment of saying they don't match. I really can't tell.

Update: (7/10)
Every three to four days.

Navigation: (5/5)
Excellent.

Errors: (5/5)
Nope.

Contact: (5/5)
Email, IM, Guestbook, Notes!

Bonus: (15/15)
About You, Songs, Links, Movie Reviews, Faq, Buddies, Counter, Cast, Rings.

Total: (91/100)

Further Comments:
Nadda.

Favorite Quote:
Didn't find one.

Reviewed by: Valerie
song of the review: you turn the screws -- cake



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