(merrynpippin)
Content: (28/30)
Started here and ended on the index. The thing I liked most about your writing is your web of characters. I liked how they were so complex, even though we didn't hear very much about him. I also like that you write when you have something interesting to say, which is what I do, because it makes each entry have a point, and once you start doing it, it happens almost every time you sit down to write. You do write very well, be proud.
Design: (20/30)
Meh, I like it well enough I guess. I wish the textboxes and image were the same width, the bio weren't so long, the background weren't white or the textboxes weren't red. The white font looks good but the sizes of date/time and short description are really big, and I like the image alone, but besides that, it seems like there's a lot else that could be fixed.
Update: (9/10)
Just about every day. Nice job.
Navigation: (5/5)
Easy.
Errors: (5/5)
None.
Contact: (5/5)
A whole lot of fucks. :)
Bonus: (15/15)
Instant messagin, guestmap, imood, reads, graphs, society, etc.
Total: (87/100)
Further Comments:
None.
Favorite Quote:
"I cry because I have no shoulder to cry on."
Reviewed by: Valerie