(miedema2002)
Content: (24/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I've had you on my profile/buddy list for a while, so I could keep tracking your entries over a longer period without having to read them all at once. Generally, I feel that you're a good writer; you write often and your diary is a very complete narrative of your life. But I feel that sometimes you could be a little too wordy, and that I couldn't get through all of it. Of course, not knowing you personally always makes a difference.
I find that I always try to write wordy entries too, because if you have a lot to say, this is a great forum to share it in. But sometimes I get the feeling that I am the only one who reads all that I write. If that is the purpose of your writing, keep to it. But I get the feeling that by desiring reviews, you also want to see what other people think of your writing... so, well, there you are, I guess.
Design: (26/30)
My only complaint about this design from Kiwi Design is that on the entry pages, the text doesn't fit in the space provided. It falls out on the left side of each text box, and I'm not entirely sure why. It seems like it must be something that you've done, because most designers wouldn't let this go unnoticed, but you never know. The rest of the design is well done and matches the style of your diary, so I like it a lot.
Update: (9/10)
Pretty often, actually! I'm impressed! Not everyday, but pretty often nonetheless.
Navigation: (5/5)
This design works very well for navigation. It's all separated and clean and easy to use.
Errors: (5/5)
All the links are working very well, everything seems in order!
Contact: (5/5)
Notes, Guestbook, Email.
Bonus: (15/15)
Oh gosh, most of your links lead to pages and pages of links. You've definately got enough :)
Total: (89/100)
Further Comments:
Sorry if it's not all clear. I was being sucked in by a scary show on TV. Nice job though!
Reviewed by: Valerie