(msmmack)
Content: (26/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I see now (see "update" section for full explanation) why you weren't updating: you were making BAGS! How dare the bags replace beloved diaryland! No, as of late with diaryland being down, I should be making bags or something too...
Your entries, are thoughtful and well-written. I especially liked the one about you sitting on the back of the car having a vehement discussion with the old man at the car garage. That was enjoyable. Your stories/entries were often funny in the way that you presented them, and this made them highly enjoyable for a reviewer. While I don't really feel that I've gotten to know very much about you from reading your entries, maybe that's your goal in writing. I do think that sometimes you write really obscure entries (like about deleting your notes) that I can't figure out why you would write. Personally I only write when I've got a whole lot to say and a log of emotional garbage to clean out to your site, and you seem to do that sometimes, but not too directly. You more use your site to update on your life, and I suppose that is fine, if that's your goal. If you're going to update on your life, my strongest suggestion would be to add more emotion or direct thoughts from the events you're describing though. Otherwise, you seem to be presenting yourself confidently and how you want to, and that is good!
Design: (28/30)
My eeeeyyyyyeeeeessss...they're melting! No, I'm just kidding. Obviously this design works very well for your site: it's YOUR name. The colors all look good together, and while the twinkliness is a little disconcerting to eyes while trying to read, you like it and it fits the site, and that's all I care about.
Update: (5/10)
(This section was done before the content section.) You were doing way good at the beginning of the month, but what happened? Maybe I'll find out as I read, but your updatage hasn't been so good as of late...
Navigation: (5/5)
Very simple, easy to use. Only six links--woo!
Errors: (5/5)
Nadda.
Contact: (2/5)
Notes.
Bonus: (12/15)
Movies, Players, Quizzes, Reviews.
Total: (83/100)
Further Comments:
Song of the review: Unbelievable, EMF -- Revive the 80s!
Favorite Quote:
I never found one! :(
Reviewed by: Valerie