(neverforgett)
Content: (29/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Excellent writing. I am impressed. You are a really good writer. You seem to always be talking to someone, but it's obviously no one in the audience, and I've never seen that before. I think it's really effective for you as a writer, because you write it like a letter, and it's emotional and true, and that's the way the entries sound too. I would also say that you have a great character development, because from your Girl-Next-Door entry on, I really fell in love with this boy you want. That was a very neat thing to experience from your writing, so niiice job!
Design: (27/30)
Very enat. I like this design. I did this same idea once with a wallpaper, but I think this is way cooler. I especially like how well the title and your writing matches the template. Those are always important things to tie together. I also like how the image is just so fascinating. I could look at it for a while. I think the only thing I don't like about it, is how the image is rather wide, and there's that building and truck in the picture which are unnecessary. I dunno, that's just something I didn't like much.
Update: (10/10)
Every day that I could see. Nice job.
Navigation: (5/5)
Very cool.
Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.
Contact: (5/5)
Notes, IM, Email, Guestbook.
Bonus: (15/15)
Cast, Bio, 100 Things, Likes/Dislikes, Rings, Reviews, Imood.
Total: (96/100)
Further Comments:
Nadda.
Favorite Quote:
"We all strive to live up to this imaginary standard. No one wants to be left out, because (gasp) that would mean that you're unpopular."
Reviewed by: Valerie
song of the review: it's digestable -- ernies