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03.25.05 at 5:24 p.m.


Nonfiction

Content: (26/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I have this bizarre desire to start preaching about the obscure things that you write about, but then I realized that you write about a lot of the same topics and themes that I write about, with different characters, and that I really shouldn't ridicule that! Anyway, your entries are normal. I get a good insight into your personality and your feelings and emotions, because you write about things that are really important to you. That is the best thing to write about, because it's close to you. Also, you seem to not put as many personal thoughts into your entries, nor as many day-to-day activiites. For strengthening your site, I would suggest adding more of those aspects. Also, there are times when you don't allow yourself to be free in your content. Either you have more people reading it than you really want to, or you just don't want to elaborate. But as someone who doesn't know you, there are lots of entries that I think you're holding something back on, and I'd reall like to see what that something is. Be free, or find a site you can lock to let those emotions out.

Design: (28/30)
Taking a stab in the dark without looking, I'm guessing this is prolly a Migrane Design. Let me look...Wow! It's not. It looks a lot like the designs that they make, with typewriter symbols and such in the back. I like this design, though I'm not personally a fan of such huge looking designs. I have a large window, and the image still seems imposing. But the colors and the rest of the design all look good. You also say you like ee cummings, and I think that makes the site fit really well with your writing. That and you write about love and it's troubles quite a lot, so the words from the poem fit as well.

Update: (6/10)
Holy crap: a lot in the past few days, but not so often usually. Can we find a balance between 4 times a day and once every three or four days? Spread it out!

Navigation: (5/5)
Fine yes, fine.

Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.

Contact: (2/5)
Email.

Bonus: (14/15)
Cast, Good reads, previous lives, reviews, Bio, links.

Total: (86/100)

Further Comments:
Nah.

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not going to write. I'd say a lot of things I don't mean."

Reviewed by: Valerie

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