(oilandwater)
Content: (30/30)
Basically, I read all of 2006 to date. Wow, is what I have to say. I'm very impressed. Though I get the impressio that most of your writing is about love and that there are lots of other things going on in your life that you could talk about, I appreciate that you've created a focus in your writing. The combination of lyrics and poems and well-written entries is seamless, and I really enjoyed reading a whole years' worth (even though it wasn't that many entries.
I found that I was always finding quotes that I liked from your entries, and I really enjoyed reading your transition through the past 12 months. You're definately a great writer, and enjoyable to read. I wish you would keep writing, actually.
Design: (22/30)
A design from Pink Design. Okay, theoretically this design is spectacular. Great colors, great layout... Pink Design never fails to impress. But the fact that you perhaps don't know HTML too well allows some easily fixable problems to crop up. The first problem, as I mention in errors, is that there is an "extra" header exists where there are no extra links. The second is that on the archive page, you have a missed entries header that has a bunch of links. These links need to go. They're not in the proper place, actually they shouldn't exist at all since they're in the entries box right next door. Also, you haven't defined your older.html pages, so I'm really confused as to where each one leads.
Update: (2/10)
Well you used to be a lot more regular, but lately you've fallen off the bandwagon a lot. You haven't even updated in the last month. That's not good.
Navigation: (5/5)
Clean and nice. Pink Design always does a nice job. I like and it's easily navigable.
Errors: (3/5)
The diaryland link doesn't work, and you have no extras. Just take that spot off the design then.
Contact: (2/5)
AOL and notes. Not a whole lot.
Bonus: (11/15)
The reading list, reviews, biography.
Total: (75/100)
Further Comments:
Your writing is your saving grace in this review, and it is the best part of your website
Favorite Quote:
And to her I am just a person who
fell in her path. She picked up my
hitchhiking soul,
drove me to the next town
and kept on
driving.
Reviewed by: Valerie