Content: (22/30)
Started here and ended on the index. You know, I read about twice as much as I would normally read for a review, and I still don't feel like I know anything about you. Of 19 entries, three were about your dreams, and only about your dreams. Three or four were about your new computer. There were several more notable ones: one about your sisters car crash, one about your sister's nasty moods, and one about your grandfather. Not to bring up gad memories, but the best entry that I read was about your grandfather. While brief, it was emotionally powerful, and that's what I love in entries. It told me more about who you are as a writer and person than many of the other entries that I read. The two about your sister were the same way: they gave insight to your personality, your thoughts and your life. That is the kind of entry that I really like, and I was a bit disappointed to see that only three of 19 entries were anywhere near the emotional level. I would suggest putting more of your daily events into your entries, to start. Then begin adding your personal thoughts, and finally your emotions. I understand that you might not have wanted to write that way when you didn't have your own computer, but now you do, so open up!
Design: (21/30)
It's very plain! It's so plain that I'm not sure I can really make a judgment as to whether or not it matches your writing style. I don't see how it couldn't match. The Autumny colors are a bit odd, but I suppose if you like them then they are fine. Isn't there anything more expressive or festive that you would want to use?
Update: (4/10)
Running from 2 to 7 days between entries, I find it hard to keep up: there's no consistency in the content when there's no consistency in the updating.
Navigation: (5/5)
Easy cheese. Nice job.
Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.
Contact: (4/5)
Email, AIM, Yahoo, Comments.
Bonus: (13/15)
Pictures, Bio, Reads, Reviews, cast...
Total: (74/100)
Further Comments:
Song of the review: Hard to Explain, Strokes
Favorite Quote:
Didn't ever find one.
Reviewed by: Valerie