(punk-loser)
Content: (25/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Hm. You have an interesting style, I'll give you that. You seem to complain. A lot. About all the posers and things that you really don't like. Or rather, it's not so much complaining as just ranting about it. I can understand the injustices you see, but when it's all you talk about, I started to get bored. When you brought up other things you did and places you went, I found that your entries were far more interesting to read, and I liked that. The details you included, all of them, were really great--I thought that you had a good idea often what to put in your entries emotionally, but sometimes you just kept going..and going..and going...
Design: (22/30)
I don't like this design very much. It's a neat idea, but the problem is that the words are near impossible to see on the background. The background itself is really really cool, and the whole thing flows together, but when it comes to reading the entries, I almost always had to highlight them to see what the words were saying. I don't really know what to suggest, because I"m not sure a different font color would help. Maybe putting a black box behind the entries instead of the background there? Beyond that, I like the design, but the inability to read definately was detrimental.
Update: (8/10)
Almost every day--Nice job.
Navigation: (5/5)
Super easy.
Errors: (5/5)
Not that I found.
Contact: (5/5)
Email, Guestbook, Notes.
Bonus: (13/15)
Linkers, reviews, Rings, other faces, Links.
Total: (87/100)
Further Comments:
Nope.
Favorite Quote:
None tonight.
Reviewed by: Valerie