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Content: I love this entry. I love this line from one of your other entries, too. In fact, I love it so much, I think I'll quote it. "I won't put myself in the begging possition for him. No matter how much he at one time ment to me." Yep, that's the one. I really like the way you write. Some of your older entries don't show a lot of emotion, though. Your latest ones are really heartfelt and funny, I like them. {28/30}
Design: I don't think this layout really fits you. I know it's a Pixie Design and that you had nothing to do with it, but I just don't like it. I don't like the quotes on the top and bottom of the page and it just doesn't fit you. I don't know why but I think a layout with some purple to it would go really good with your writing. {23/30}
Update: You skip around... a lot. {5/10}
Navigation: All links are neatly lined up on the left side. Nice and simple. {5/5}
Errors: An occasional spelling error or two and your guestbook doesn't match your diary. {3/5}
Contact: E-mail, Guestbook, Notes. {5/5}
Bonus: Cast... I actually think that's it. There's not really any extra stuff that make it stand out. {5/15}
Total: 74/100
Reviewed by Yelena.