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saintz-
03.24.05 at 12:36 p.m.


v.3 // Tiredness fuels empty thoughts:
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Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Whoa now. I'm actually rather suprised that you are quite poignant (can't spell that...) but in a highly obscure way. Yeah, you definately don't win any great awards for being funniest, most vocabluaric (as in, using a challegning vocabulary) or even well-punctuated, but I enjoyed reading your site. You apparently have a rather unique outlook on life (neverminding that "second chance" stuff), and it translates well into your writing. Your stories (?) are interesting to read, and each entry is defiantely unique. Some are just fragments, an interesting way to put thoughts down without bogging the details. Some entries were an actual story, filled with your quips about life and other things, which were also thoughtful (full of thoughts). I suppose that I enjoyed reading your site quite a bit. I hate to say, because it really upset me when some reviewer said this to me, but I'm like 98% sure you're a guy, and that explains the rather strong lack of emotions you put into your entries. I suppose I should mention that for a fuller, more rounded reading experience, emotions are a necessary part, but I don't think it's entirely necessary for the style and voice that you use. I suppose you could just keep doing what you've been doing all along, because I enjoyed it.

Design: (24/30)
I so loved Jude Law that I gave you full marks for him.. No I wish! Sorry, I really do like this Jude Law picture, but I can't figure out how the heck it relates to you or your writing. The theme of the site (tiredness fuels empty thoughts) and the colors and the whole design work, but Jude Law is one out of left field. Why Jude Law? I need some explanation or something. So, the design itself is good, I suppose I just can't see how it relates to your writing. Maybe if you had an entry that explained your design?

Update: (4/10)
Yeah...not so much. Every, week or so? That's not too good for consistency.

Navigation: (5/5)
Oh yes, fine and easy. No problemos.

Errors: (5/5)
Not that I wandered across.

Contact: (4/5)
Email, guestbook, notes, AIM.

Bonus: (13/15)
Reads, webcam, wishlist, reviews, links.

Total: (82/100)

Further Comments:
For some reason, my leg really hurt the entire time I was reviewing you. What's up with that? Song of the review: Since you been gone, Kelly Clarkson (YES, Kelly Clarkson).

Favorite Quote:
"I’m feeling pizza."

Reviewed by: Valerie

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