Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Well, there are two very different things happening in your site, one of which I really like, and one of which I don't favor so much.

I really like how honest you are in your site: you're very blunt about your past and the truth of what's happened in your life. It gives you a very refreshing and thought-provoking aspect to your entries that makes them really enjoyable to read. You're not trying to sugar-coat anything when you talk about the hard times that you have had in your life. You're not afraid of them anymore, because they're in the past, and you honestly vocalize your fears and thoughts about the future. That is a great aspect to have in your writing.

I don't so much enjoy the naivete (if I spelt it incorrectly, I'm sorry!) that you have in your writing. I think I can understand though, where it comes from, because you have had a very hard life so far, and that can lead to psychological things that I see in your diary. Mainly what this means is that I worry about you being hurt because of how naive your outlook is on relationships (e.g. Chris). This just the first thing that I picked up on from reading your site, but I do wish you the best in the relationship! I read you were 19, but because of the hard times you had in your past, a lot of times you talked about relationships a bit more like you were 15 or 16 (about the time where your relationships started to get really f-ed up). I'm rambling...

So, I suppose I really do like your writing. There were some stand-out entries where you let it all loose and beared your soul, and that is what I really enjoy reading. That aspect of your writing out-weighs the things that I didn't like, too.

Design: (25/30)
I like it! But it really doesn't seem to match anything else in your site. The design itself is really good, it looks nice and functions and is clean, but I don't really see how 'peaceful serenity' is applicable to anything in your life. It's like you said, that you really give the impression of a bubbly, happy person, yet this design doesn't convey that. Nor does it convey your darker side, that you say scares everyone away. I dunno, I just can't seem to connect it to the way you present yourself. It is a nice design though :)

Update: (8/10)
Pretty often, and with multiples.

Navigation: (4/5)
A bit wonky looking to me, with the extra break in the older entries.

Errors: (5/5)
None!

Contact: (2/5)
Email, Comments.

Bonus: (15/15)
People & Places, Diary Info, About Me, Extras: Quizzes, Links, Reviews....+more.

Total: (86/100)

Further Comments:
Nadda.

Favorite Quote:
Your entry on how you got your username (here), because then it made sense!!!

Reviewed by: Valerie

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