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Valerie - 21yo
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smiley375
10.20.03 at 10:25 a.m.


Your at home, In fact your about to read my diary... right now. Why are you smiling?:
(smiley375)

Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. I read quite a bit, and I enjoyed reading your site. There were times of course where I couldn't connect (it's sort of a generation gap thing) but there were quite a few times where I connected very well. I really enjoyed the way you would tell your stories and I think I could end up reading a lot of your site if I put my mind to it.

Design: (26/30)
Once I turned down the font size on the browser I was using, your page looked way better. You should take a look (View, Text Size) and see what size yours is, because at "Medium" the font is HUGE! Fixing that would be really nice. I love the image! The background is kind of er..cheesy? As are the words at the top. Not the words are cheesy, but just where they are and how they look. There has to be a way to make that better. And why is your textbox so skinny? Making it wider would look nicer I think, because it would contrast the image. These are easy things to fix, so I would suggest them.

Update: (10/10)
Every day.

Navigation: (5/5)
Sure it's easy enough, though I do favor two navigation menus if the entries are possibly very long (one at the top of the entry and one at the bottom).

Errors: (5/5)
Nope.

Contact: (5/5)
Email, Guestbook, Notes.

Bonus: (15/15)
Links, Poems, Bio, Cast, Quiz, Rings, Guestmap, Counter.

Total: (93/100)

Further Comments:
Please fix the grammar of your title ("your" should be "you're")

Favorite Quote:
" You want a boyfriend to fill all the holes in your sad pathetic life? Well you can't have a sweet and caring guy, you get stuck with Satan himself. You want an easy life? Well you just can't have it."

Reviewed by: Valerie



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