so pale...:
(so-pale)

Content: (27/30)
Started here and ended on the index. There was one entry that stuck out to me and ticked me off. It was one, heartfelt as it may be, where you write to Sam and that is your entry for the day. I've been told this so many times, but DON'T write to people in your entries. I understand it's hard, really it is, but you talk to someone else, and then as a reviewer I'm like, why should I be reading this?
Next, I would say you write very well beyond that. Once you got started about Nath and things, I found you definately had the kind of reviewing entries I like. You wrote about what happened, and a lot of your thoughts, and you remind me of people I know, so I connected with you. I enjoyed almost all of your writing because of that connection. Nice job.

Design: (29/30)
I like this template a lot. It's really simple, but the hearts and x's on the top, as well as the hanging flowers are nice. I also like how the short description is really light, and not so blaring. But it's also in a different font, which looks good against the plain font of the entries. Oh Neat! The hearts and x's are links! That is kickin....

Update: (9/10)
Pretty often...

Navigation: (5/5)
Very cool!

Errors: (5/5)
None.

Contact: (5/5)
Email, Guestbook, notes.

Bonus: (15/15)
Bio, History, Reviews, visuals, Graphics, commands, quizzes, rings, dollies...

Total: (95/100)

Further Comments:

I'm worried about my pinkyredreview...are you?

Favorite Quote:

"because, all i ever want in my life is for someone to be always there for me, even if i myself am not. i want someone who'll understand me without me having to explain why. i want someone who'll accept who i am, no matter what..."
I am being that "someone" for a friend, and I see now how important it is...

Reviewed by: Valerie

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