(starwhore)
Content: (25/30)
Started here and ended on the index. You know, I've done five reviews in a row now, and I'm afraid I might be starting to sound redundant, so you're the last one for the night.
Well...ah yes. You're a poetic diary, except for the index, which gave me to the misconception that you wrote day log type entries. I am much more a fan of day log entries because I think inside the box and like all those details of the day to give me a full picture of what is going on in each entry. Sometimes I can think outside the box: I like that you put a lot of emotion into your entries, even though/especially because they are poetic. While the lack the niceties of daily details, they are well written and obviously thoughtful. If there were any way that you could add said details to your poems, I am sure reviewers like myself would greatly appreciate it. I love the details, and just can't get over it. Your emotions are good, but I feel they could be more strongly conveyed if I could more clearly understand what happened to inspire the emotion.
Design: (22/30)
Erm, I like the idea, but I don't like the presentation, and I'm not entirely sure if it matches your writing style or personality. I don't get much of the impression that you are a geek, so I can't make that connection. Did I miss something that would explain why you have this design? Also, I don't like how the title words (Geeks do not have pedigrees) is within the textbox, because it seems to disappear and lose the focus of the design as I read the entries. The design looks good otherwise, clean lines and matching color schemes. Just those two things I didn't like/was lost on.
Update: (8/10)
You seem to be rather frequent, even though your archives PAGE doesn't have DATES....ARGGG!
Navigation: (5/5)
Fine fine, but some of your links are a bit confusingly titled.
Errors: (5/5)
Nah.
Contact: (3/5)
Notes, Post...(you're daring to put a post out on the web!)
Bonus: (15/15)
Quizzes, Revies, reas, wishlist, music, cast, olivia...
Total: (83/100)
Further Comments:
Song of the review: When I look to the Sky -- Train or Jerk It Out -- Caesars (from the IPod commercials)
Favorite Quote:
Nah. Didn't come across one I liked.
Reviewed by: Valerie