sugababie88
Content: I'm all for ranting, but this is just whining. Ok, what really annoys me is that you actually talk to people in your diary, whether it be the general public or someone specific. It's a diary, not a public service announcement. If you say you're going to update this every time you change your layout, then, for pig's sake, update it, because as far as I can tell, that's not Buffy. Your writing, overall, really isn't that bad. You have a good mixture of day-logs, which are full of emotion and details, and rants, which are you complaining about miniscule things when what you really need to do is open up your mind. Your spelling's not too horrid, but, good nonexistent God, your grammar will be the death of I. "I didn't even get finished the test," for example. {24/30}
Design: Oh, wow, I can't stand disclaimers of that nature. Anyway, in context to your entries, this Alee Designs layout does not fit. It's organized and all, the picture's not that bad, but its background is a different color than the layout's background. {26/30}
Update: You update pretty regularly, skipping a few days here and there. {9/10}
Navigation: All of the links are down the left side of the entry box. {5/5}
Errors: Spelling and grammar, as I have already pointed out; your 'about me', 'cast', and 'Sweet Reviews' links don't work. {3/5}
Contact: E-mail, notes, guestbook, tagboard, AIM. {5/5}
Bonus: Rings, reviews, links, ABCs, name definition, why this layout, etc. {15/15}
Total: 87/100
Favorite Quote: "Some guys actually have a heart... unlike most in our school. All the ones who do make the best friends! (Probably the best boyfriends too... but I don't let myself go there)"
Comments: "If he could pick a different topic except this stupid gay ass movie..." Don't use "gay" as a derogatory remark; it's really discriminating and I'm trying so hard not to give you my infamous What's wrong with being gay speech. A few other little remarks scattered in some random entries also show the deterioration of our society, but I'm not going to get into that.
Reviewed by Yelena.