(sunstargirl)
Content: (25/30)
Started here and ended on the index. Your entries each seem to be very independent of one another, which gives your overall diary an interesting feel. It makes me feel like you only write when you have a commentary to make about something, which doesn't give me a lot of insight into your life. I generally feel like there are two genres of diary, yours fitting into that social commentary one, rather than the personal commentary genre. I'm preferential to the latter, actually.
But I like that you use pictures to compliment your entries on occasion, and that when you tell a complete story, it's actually quite compelling. I started on the egging story which was a fabulous place to start. I think that those stories are my favorite parts of your diary, because it's about you and your life, rather than about society and things you like or don't like about them.
Design: (23/30)
Well, I like the idea of your design. I think it's a very neat theory, having pictrues of yourself and of people who are important to you spread across the top and the bottom of the entry. But I don't like that it's one of the old Diaryland backgrounds, nor all the images you've put at the bottom. I think they detract from the cohesion of the design. I also don't really like where the navigation is, but I mention that in the navigation section.
Update: (7/10)
Your updating is somewhat irregular, but not too bad. You update about 1-2 times a week, which is pretty regular for diaryland. And each time you update is relatively independent of other times, so it seems like this style works for you.
Navigation: (3/5)
I like navigation more when it's accessible no matter what spot you are on the page like in a side panel. Beyond that, it's easily navigated and simple.
Errors: (5/5)
Everything seems to be in working order, so it all looks good.
Contact: (2/5)
Guestbook and Notes on the main page. Nothing else on the profile or anything.
Bonus: (7/15)
A link or two, but not much beyond that.
Total: (70/100)
Further Comments:
Ouch. Sorry about that score. It's hurt most by not having extras, I think, but that's the way the scoring is set.
Reviewed by: Valerie